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    Senior Member Dylan8i's Avatar
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    The road less traveled

    i'm not really sure about this image. let me know what you guys think.


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    Re: The road less traveled

    Hey Dylan8i, watch out! you're driving on the wrong side of the road! ;)

    I don't know if the car is needed really. I would've like it without the car. You've got some beautiful fluffy clouds, gorgeous blue skies and a good looking landscape. I think that would've been enough.
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    Re: The road less traveled

    I don't think the car is needed. What you can try is adding graphics like from a video game. With like the speed or time remaining lol. But then it would be better for that if it were a horizontal shot.

    The road could provide nice lines in the shot if it were horizontal. I really like the colors and clouds.

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    Re: The road less traveled

    I have the feeling the car is there for the reflection ... I don't see a red car giving that much of a reflection to make it worth keeping ... I think its a great shot but the car is distracting .. maybe something more reflective of the scenery would of been nice ...

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    Re: The road less traveled

    Thanks for the replys.

    Well this shot was taken while i was driving at about 40 mph. i was trying to get a good shot of the twisty road. and there was nowhere to pull off. yeah i could have stopped in the middle of the road. you can see the road as it twists off in the background alot better in a big version.


    thats why i wasn't sure if this shot worked or not.
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    Nikkor AF-S 18-135
    Nikkor AF-S 60mm macro 2.8
    Nikon 70-200 2.8 vr
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    Kenoko extension tube set
    SB-600

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