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    Stockbridge, MA Home 1734

    Yashica, 80mm, f/11, 125, polarizer
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    Shooting B&W with:
    a Yashica 635, 120 roll - 80mm Yashinon lens and an Agfa Billy 0 (Zero) 127 roll - Solinar 7.5cm lens
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    a Yashica-Mat, 120 roll - 80mm Lumaxar lens and a Canon FTb, 135 roll - 55mm and 85mm FD lenses

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    Re: Stockbridge, MA Home 1734

    Kelt - Well, I've done some web-browser scrolling up and down and found that I like it a lot better without the sky. Perhaps the blue is too distracting. Seems a tad bit soft, esp for a MF camera, but perhaps the scanning process did that. Its also a little clipped off at the bottom. Could you catch this at sunrise or sunset? The lighting is a tad bit flat also.

    Here's an idea - crop off the top half of the photo and fill the blue sky with another darker color, eg dark grey, or even a wicked dark multicolor. That might make it appear a little more mysterious or threatening. NE houses look like they're taylor made for haunted house themes.

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    Re: Stockbridge, MA Home 1734

    I agree with GB in regards to the crop, it definitely would help the shot out. Also, having the sunrise/sunset would add some great lighting dynamics.

    Well done,

    Jared

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    Re: Stockbridge, MA Home 1734

    Tom,

    This place looks very familiar! Actually I know exactly where it is. I frequently go to Stockbridge - one of my favorite places. For me personally, it's the best of both worlds. I love the town, and I always enjoy walking around - including frequent visits to the Normal Rockwell Museum. It is also a great place for me to make a retreat at the Shrine of Divine Mercy. Behind the Chapel there, you can probably see the entire Berkshires. Also - can't forget Tanglewood - the Boston Pops Orchestra's summer home.

    Now for the image. You've done a great job with the composition. I've shot a few of that house, but could never quite get a decent angle. You captured it nicely. The color is also impressive - and personally I like the sky. Very nice.

    Liz

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    Re: Stockbridge, MA Home 1734 and BLUE SKY

    Liz … Thanks for your kind words. I truly enjoy time spent in the Berkshires and always bring my camera alone. Soon to come … Main St. Stockbridge @ X-Mas.

    Jered … Should I happen to be in Stockbridge @ 9AM I’ll shoot it again … ‘tis a 3 hour drive from my home.

    GB1 … The shy is courtesy of Mother Nature … we’re stuck with it. BTW the camera is old, the scanner is old and so is the operator of both! I do not have a clue how to change the blue shy to another color.

    The picture is my ¿ 46/47/48 ? year old friend. It is the no frills model.
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    Shooting B&W with:
    a Yashica 635, 120 roll - 80mm Yashinon lens and an Agfa Billy 0 (Zero) 127 roll - Solinar 7.5cm lens
    Shooting color with:
    a Yashica-Mat, 120 roll - 80mm Lumaxar lens and a Canon FTb, 135 roll - 55mm and 85mm FD lenses

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