Around the corner

[julsoph]

Okay, so I'm trying to work with some of the suggestions made on my Lamps thread...and I did a few photos today, trying to see what I could do with fences in my neighborhood. I know it's not quite the same as the lamps, but it's still giving me practice all the same. This is one of the ones I felt came out pretty well. I fiddled with it a bit on the computer...
Emily

[Lava Lamp]

Okay, so I'm trying to work with some of the suggestions made on my Lamps thread...and I did a few photos today, trying to see what I could do with fences in my neighborhood. I know it's not quite the same as the lamps, but it's still giving me practice all the same. This is one of the ones I felt came out pretty well. I fiddled with it a bit on the computer...
Emily

I went back to the lamps post to see what you were trying to work on. I guess my first impression is that this seems like black and white with a purple sky, which doesn't look right. Also I'm not sure the subject is very well defined. It kinda seems like I'm waiting for a kid or a dog or something to appear on that path, rather than looking at the repeating lines of the fence (if that is what you wanted...)

[julsoph]

Yeah...you're absolutely right...the color on this is totally off.
I AM going for the repeated effect...and I understand what you're saying about confusion re: the subject. I have a hard time figuring out how to get the angle I want.
Thanks for commenting...I really appreciate the feedback.
Emily