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11-25-2009, 05:50 PM
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In the dark river reflection
I shot these last night on the North Fork of the American River. I had to play around with different lighting tools and camera settings to get any shot at all. 4-20 million candlepower floodlights placed 1/4 mile behind me, a slight glimmer form the 1/4 moon, and a combination of the eight lights mounted on my jeep is what I used for lighting. The fog was rolling into the canyon as I was setting up and made for a little more challenging capture.I was looking for a soft focus night shot. But as usual I'm not happy with them..another re-shoot..No complaints..I don't mind at all  What do ya think?
Thanks for any advice or critiques..
Darin
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11-25-2009, 06:45 PM
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Re: In the dark river reflection
some cool colors, but it looks a bit too over-processed to me. it may also just be how the uploaded versions are showing up on my computer but they seem a bit too blurry in areas that shouldn't be.
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11-25-2009, 06:52 PM
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Re: In the dark river reflection
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some cool colors, but it looks a bit too over-processed to me. it may also just be how the uploaded versions are showing up on my computer but they seem a bit too blurry in areas that shouldn't be.
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Its not your computer.. Trying to get focus correct was killing me with the no/low light. When I sharpen them in processing..it just doesn't look right..Back to the drawing boards  Thanks for the comment..
Darin
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11-25-2009, 10:09 PM
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Re: In the dark river reflection
I like #1. I find your composition pleasing. Though the color may be over-saturated, I have a tendency to favor that in varying degrees. The one thing that does bother me about #1 is the ray/flare things somewhat, but I would even like that if there were just more detail in that big, blah hill.
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11-26-2009, 09:20 AM
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Re: In the dark river reflection
I agree they are soft, the first one is my favorite by a lot, enough going on to keep my eye, great composition and angling. I'm not sure if the first is soft or if thats just strong image grain. Try ISO 200-400 with a tripod.
*Edit - scratch that, I checked exif - ISO 800 at THIRTY SIX SECONDS! Woah, must have been about pitch black there, the image grain must be long exposure grain then. Considering that, I think the only thing you could possibly do to do any better would be to get a lens with a much wider aperture, that shot at 17mm, get something around 20mm at f/2 or faster. Can't really critique on this considering you did everything you could possibly do for the shot.
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11-28-2009, 08:21 PM
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Re: In the dark river reflection
Have you tried to just set your widest lenses to an aperture that will allow hyperfocal focusing and eyeball the distance to place your foreground? might make things easier
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