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12-01-2009, 02:11 AM
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Night Shot..River/Canyon..Take 672
Well, I thought I would give it another round. This is a different river and almost a full moon this time. I read through your critiques from my last attempt and just wanted to give a belated thanks to all that re-responded to it. So lets here it..
I should have waited around for this fog to roll in closer, problem was I didn't know it was there until I got home..Another reason why I am finding this type of shooting fun and interesting. With the low light,you really don't know whats out there until you see it on the monitor after processing.
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12-01-2009, 02:34 AM
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Re: Night Shot..River/Canyon..Take 672
The lighting is almost so good I can't tell it is night time. I looks too like I see movement in the trees. Camera motion or wind?
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12-01-2009, 03:30 AM
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Re: Night Shot..River/Canyon..Take 672
Thanks Greg. The wind was blowing about 15-20mph.I had it mounted on a tri-pod w/cable release but the winds were killing me. I tried maxing out the ISO to compensate for a shorter exposure but there still is some wind blur. These canyons are a funnel for the wind around here. One of these days it will all come . No wind, mixed clouds, full moon, white water and why not throw in a meteor shower  . Lately its been one or the other. I just need them to all happen at once now.
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12-01-2009, 06:28 AM
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Re: Night Shot..River/Canyon..Take 672
Very nice, can you give me the specifics, ISO, exposure, lens etc.
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12-01-2009, 11:29 AM
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Very nice, can you give me the specifics, ISO, exposure, lens etc.
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Thanks Bill. All of the EXIF data is there for each picture if you want too check it out the specifics.
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12-01-2009, 03:29 PM
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Re: Night Shot..River/Canyon..Take 672
Really nice shots. Looks like you nailed the exposure spot-on.
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12-01-2009, 06:38 PM
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Re: Night Shot..River/Canyon..Take 672
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.....With the low light,you really don't know whats out there until you see it on the monitor after processing....
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an extended meaning to shooting in the dark
if you didn't say it was shoot with moon light I wouldn't be able to tell
on the third photo: what is the diagonal streak of light on the sky ?
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12-01-2009, 07:49 PM
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Re: Night Shot..River/Canyon..Take 672
Thanks Joe.
Armando, I think that streak in the sky is from an airplane that had flown over a few minutes before and the white streak it left is slowly falling apart. or it could be just a cloud?
Thanks for the replys
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12-01-2009, 08:00 PM
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Re: Night Shot..River/Canyon..Take 672
Excellent work. The last is my favorite. Very painterly in feel (due to what seems to be tree movement).
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12-01-2009, 08:02 PM
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Re: Night Shot..River/Canyon..Take 672
Wow - these are really cool! Very interesting light - love the stars and the mist. Nice.
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12-01-2009, 11:20 PM
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Re: Night Shot..River/Canyon..Take 672
I love the shots. I wonder though, how making them look old with some sepia would make them? Give them a more western feel perhaps?
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12-01-2009, 11:39 PM
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I love the shots. I wonder though, how making them look old with some sepia would make them? Give them a more western feel perhaps?
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Thanks again for the reply's.
I wont be happy until I get that shot I have embedded in my mind, but not yet accomplished. I'm getting closer , that's a good thing. I try and take advantage of the area that I live in with the clean air and crystal clear sky. The shot I want and hope to get is a thunder/lighting storm,on full moon, at the river with lighting traveling from the top of the sky to the bottom. I have seen it like that twice in the last 8 years here. Last year was one of them and at the time I didn't have the camera to capture it..and boy did I try, man that was frustrating. Nothing like standing on the edge of a river in a thunder storm with a camera on a metal tri-pod with 1100 lighting strikes over your head in 45 minutes and seeing 60 foot pine trees splitting in half close enough to feel the ground shake. Yeah I know not to smart...but I tend to live life a little adventures or on the edge as some say. Either or it was a memory of a lifetime and I cant wait for the next one  It would be great to capture so others could feel the thunder in the photo.
byjamesderuvo, thats a great idea..feel free if you want at it.
Thanks again
Darin
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12-02-2009, 02:39 AM
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Re: Night Shot..River/Canyon..Take 672
Cool photos. I think the most successful ones are where the stars are actually visible. Reminds me of Rene Magritte's God's Salon.
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