The Cement Factory

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  • 01-21-2007, 12:14 AM
    afdlips
    The Cement Factory
    I went to a cement factory with a friend today. took a few shots before we got kicked out. i didnt mind because i was so cold and i was only in a thin hoody. the temp was like 2 degress F, so it wasnt the most fun. but on the other hand finals are finally over so i needed to get out. heres one of them so check it out and feel free to edit anything.
    <img src ="http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a392/afdlips/cement.jpg">
  • 01-21-2007, 12:31 AM
    gahspidy
    Re: The Cement Factory
    I like this. The distortions are working to the advantage of the image and your composition. This looks like some strange, science fiction sort of industrial site the way it has been captured. The black background and mysterious shadows make for a very interesting image. Good work
  • 01-21-2007, 12:38 AM
    afdlips
    Re: The Cement Factory
    thanks. i was a little iffy about this one. the plant is within a mile of rocky flats, so you never know what could be going down here.
  • 01-21-2007, 10:11 AM
    Greg McCary
    Re: The Cement Factory
    I think you have a great eye for composition. I like the angles on this one. A interesting subject and a good choice for a night picture. I don't think it would have been as good shot in the day. The lights work well because they all seem symmetrical.
    Greg
  • 01-21-2007, 10:22 AM
    Coastal Flyer
    Re: The Cement Factory
    I agree. Very nice shot. The lines, angles, shapes made the converging lines, all work well. The colors are nice and the lights work well. Good shot.

    CF
  • 01-21-2007, 12:50 PM
    afdlips
    Re: The Cement Factory
    thanks for all of your comments! i really apreciated all of your critique-age. new word...just made it up.
  • 01-21-2007, 01:14 PM
    payn817
    Re: The Cement Factory
    Nothing more to add really. The owner might be interested in this one to hang in the office. Nice image.:thumbsup:
  • 01-21-2007, 01:22 PM
    afdlips
    Re: The Cement Factory
    thanks. haha...they were nice guys there...or as he said it "not trying to be a meany", so i might drop a print off to them.
  • 01-22-2007, 01:09 AM
    Herriot
    Re: The Cement Factory
    Great composition and a great detail to the lights, congratulations on the featured photo and I hope that they are happy with the printed version!

    Herriot
  • 01-22-2007, 03:30 AM
    Greg McCary
    Re: The Cement Factory
    Congrats on the featured photo, I agree with taking the owners a copy of the print.
    Greg
  • 01-22-2007, 09:12 AM
    Coastal Flyer
    Re: The Cement Factory
    Congratulations on the Featured Photo. Much deserved.

    CF
  • 01-22-2007, 01:04 PM
    afdlips
    Re: The Cement Factory
    thanks a lot everyone! haha i cant believe that. lol
  • 01-24-2007, 11:21 PM
    starriderrick
    Re: The Cement Factory
    Well deserved recognition. This rocks !!Excellent results.
    Rick
  • 01-25-2007, 03:36 PM
    afdlips
    Re: The Cement Factory
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by starriderrick
    Well deserved recognition. This rocks !!Excellent results.
    Rick

    Thanks! i apreciate it.
  • 01-27-2007, 09:35 PM
    Bell2387
    Re: The Cement Factory
    Wow, the angles are really nice in this picture!