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    Zippo

    This is my Zippo that I wanted to work with the lighting and the silver zippo. Any comments are welcome.
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    Re: Zippo

    I can almost smell it.
    For me its too dark, especially on the edges of the lighter and the top.
    Would like to see some subdued highlights on the edges to define the shape.
    You have those higlights on the bottom.
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    Re: Zippo

    Is this what you were thinking?
    The reason for the blue highlights on the bottom were because behind me as i was taking the picture I was using a blue light to get a reflection or blue on the lighter.
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