Is this one better?

[payn817]

In the original, I was trying to make it seem as if it were shot at a hangar, as opposed to a musem. Here is the original though, unedited. Well, I guess the question would be what to do to make this work. It obviously has distractions, and isn't that great from a technical standpoint.

[Hindey]

Planes fly. Fundamentally, I think this image won't work so long as the plane is the sole subject and it is grounded. To me, it should be in the air. Perhaps focusing on a detail we don't get to see when the plane is in the air will bring interest.

HTH,
Chris

[Todd Patten]

I think I understand what you are going after but this one still falls short. The wings and nose are cut off. It prevents the viewer form experiencing the power that the bird brings.

I do think the colors are a bit better.