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    One more Yosemite pic...

    Dear All,

    Here is another pic. from my short vacation in Yosemite National Park. What do you think?

    F100 - 24mm/f20 (or 22?) - polarizer and 1 stop split ND - Velvia 50 .. and obviously tripod!

    Should I keep this in my portfolio?

    Thanks for having a look.

    Cheers,

    Steph.
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    Re: One more Yosemite pic...

    Best yet. Beautiful composition. Very good job! Keep this one in the old portfolio.

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    Re: One more Yosemite pic...

    Interesing Foreground, great color in the sky, nice little clouds.... You've got everything here to make a good landscape! Looks good, My vote is keep it in too!
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    Re: One more Yosemite pic...

    I like it. It's a busy scene, but the composition brings it together. I first look at the rock formations in the foreground. . then my eye is lead by the rock patterns to the right side of the frame out to the horizon and mountains. The lake then brings my eye towards the left side and then back down to the rocks. Keep it
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    Re: One more Yosemite pic...

    Quote Originally Posted by Steph_B
    Dear All,

    Here is another pic. from my short vacation in Yosemite National Park. What do you think?

    F100 - 24mm/f20 (or 22?) - polarizer and 1 stop split ND - Velvia 50 .. and obviously tripod!

    Should I keep this in my portfolio?

    Thanks for having a look.

    Cheers,

    Steph.
    I think it is a very nice landscape for the reasons others have already stated. It's not to long ago that a glacier was sitting here melting it's life away and dropping these boulders on the landscape. The picture looks just a bit over saturated on my non calibrated monitor.
    Nice work Steph.

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    Re: One more Yosemite pic...

    Quote Originally Posted by Chunk
    I The picture looks just a bit over saturated on my non calibrated monitor.
    Nice work Steph.

    I was thinking the photo could use a little more saturation, but this is probably my monitor.

    Great photo. Agree with all the comments above. Nice job.

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    Re: One more Yosemite pic...

    Thank you all for your kind words and taking the time to drop a line. I am glad that you enjoyed this pic!

    Cheers,

    Stephane

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    Re: One more Yosemite pic...

    Nothing wrong from my point of view; I think it just lookes a bit unsaturated due to this webpage being very white. It's good panorama, definately the sort of thing you'd see on a poster. A keeper, surely?

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