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    Waiting for the Colonel to Come Home

    This old home dates back to the early 1800's and sits on a little hill about a block from my house. It seems to be sitting there just waiting on the master of the house to return from the Civil War. Very strong afternoon front light made the whole house seem much prouder and confident than it usually does.
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    the first one

    speaks more to me than the second...the second looks like a standard look at a pretty house...the second one though is nicely set off by the contrast between the run down steps with the modern pole for railing and this grand "plantation" looking estate. Have you tried it in BW with quite a bit of contrast I think it would have even more impact...this house has wonderful lines and I like the vantage point you shot from....thanks for sharing it with us.
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    I think you are right

    Quote Originally Posted by natatbeach
    speaks more to me than the second...the second looks like a standard look at a pretty house...the second one though is nicely set off by the contrast between the run down steps with the modern pole for railing and this grand "plantation" looking estate. Have you tried it in BW with quite a bit of contrast I think it would have even more impact...this house has wonderful lines and I like the vantage point you shot from....thanks for sharing it with us.
    I think you are right about the difference between the two images and I had more or less intended them as that. I did try several different angles and used various parts of the steps and wall as forground I'm am still playing with them. I have not tried b&w yet mainly because I am fairly inept with PS and grayscale convertions that pop. Thanks for the comment and the suggestions.

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    4 easy steps

    here ya go as a quick preview
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    OT,
    I personally like the second shot best.( whole house with no steps). I think your framing and comp is good, Ilike the bit of clouds just above the house and through the trees. The shadows of the branches on the house and the lawn,very nice. And what a beautiful house this is. My only nitpik is it seems a bit washed out. maybe a little adjustment or if your not too skilled with ps yet, try just a one step "enhance photo" action.
    The other shot with the steps. . . . .I like those steps and think that maybe a different angle, perhaps lower down like 1-2 ft from the ground looking up towrds top of house and sky.
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