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    Would You Like Fries With That?


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    Re: Would You Like Fries With That?

    What a great subject. I love the symmetry, and the expression on the guy's face is great. Lovely colors, and a great shot.

    Nice shooting,

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    Re: Would You Like Fries With That?

    I'm not clear on the meaning of this shot. It seems posed, but what's the story? what's the commentary?
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    Re: Would You Like Fries With That?

    Quote Originally Posted by kellybean
    I'm not clear on the meaning of this shot. It seems posed, but what's the story? what's the commentary?
    I left out the story because I wanted to get the reaction to the photo first. Yes, it's posed. I pulled my dining room table apart (as if to put in the leaf) and got in the middle with the ketchup arranged around me. The full story and another photo is here. On a tighter crop of the photo with my two year old, I liked how his head interacted with the bottles so I setup this shot with my own noodle.

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    Re: Would You Like Fries With That?

    What a fun portrait!
    The lighting on it is a little flat, that is the colors(red) doesn't quite "pop".
    But, I do like how you arranged things, and the model has a very playful expression.
    You might consider posting this in the Lighting forum, for some lighting help...
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    Re: Would You Like Fries With That?

    I have no comment on this photo, but i have to just say that that story is too, too funny. I used to live in Michigan, and I used to have all kinds of fun doing stuff like this with mijer. LOL...they make shopping fun!
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    Re: Would You Like Fries With That?

    Quote Originally Posted by EmbeddedMatt
    I left out the story because I wanted to get the reaction to the photo first. Yes, it's posed. I pulled my dining room table apart (as if to put in the leaf) and got in the middle with the ketchup arranged around me. The full story and another photo is here. On a tighter crop of the photo with my two year old, I liked how his head interacted with the bottles so I setup this shot with my own noodle.
    OH! Ha ha ... too bad I don't live in KY. We've finally made it to the bottom of our bottle here, and need to pick up another.
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    Re: Would You Like Fries With That?

    nice shot, that's a lot of ketchup


    How about a shot with mustard? :P
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    Re: Would You Like Fries With That?

    Quote Originally Posted by mtbbrian
    The lighting on it is a little flat, that is the colors(red) doesn't quite "pop".
    Brian, you're right about the reds. I tried punching up the bottles without giving myself a sun burn.


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    Re: Would You Like Fries With That?

    I realy like the picture, its a good idea mabey something for advertisement
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