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    Working Historic RailRoad

    I took this picture a few weeks ago at a historic working r&r near my house. I was fighting the sun most of the day, and 90% of the time the sun was shining straight at me.
    I converted the picture to B&W using Silver Efex and tried to tone down the sky as much as I could with a few spot corrections. Not sure if anything else is needed but any input is appreciated


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    Re: Working Historic RailRoad

    Nice shot! Do you mind if I try something with this and re post? Jeff
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    Re: Working Historic RailRoad

    My first impression looking at it was that the photo is a little under exposed. My eye gets drawn to the "15" on the front of the train, which I like, but the front seems so dark and hard to make out.
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    Re: Working Historic RailRoad

    Quote Originally Posted by tatadero
    My first impression looking at it was that the photo is a little under exposed. My eye gets drawn to the "15" on the front of the train, which I like, but the front seems so dark and hard to make out.
    I agree. I like it at +1.3 on the exposure. - Terry
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    Re: Working Historic RailRoad

    Quote Originally Posted by Grandpaw
    Nice shot! Do you mind if I try something with this and re post? Jeff
    No problem jeff go right ahead!

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    Re: Working Historic RailRoad

    I adjusted the shadows some and added some contrast. I also removed the power lines, Jeff
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