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Interesting colors and it borders on being a pattern shot. I like the open slot in the lower right, Is someone out for a test spin?
The photograph could have more impact if it were straighter/less rotatated and the left and right borders were better defined or symmetrical in content and spacing. These two thing would make the white railing at the bottom more a component of the composition of the photograph and not lead the eye slightly up and down as the top and bottom do.