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    Window and Wall Stuff





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    Re: Window and Wall Stuff

    Don - The top image isn't bad. I would clip off the left side stuff there. That would leave a very colorful and interesting design.

    The bottom image suffers from attention being forced to two uninteresting subjects. If you had backed off and gotten more context, this could potentially have been interesting. As is, there just isn't much there.

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    Re: Window and Wall Stuff

    Thanks GB. Both were shot with a long lens from the bus of course. I just thought the name on the window sign was unusual.

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    Re: Window and Wall Stuff

    Love the colors in the first but leaves me wanting to see the complete symbols. Can you get off the bus there?
    Can't read the first word in the secons shot.
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    Re: Window and Wall Stuff

    Its French on top:
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