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    From A Window Seat

    All comments and critique greatly appreciated.

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    Re: From A Window Seat

    The wing and sky are nice but I don't like how the engine is partially lost in the shadows. It occurs to me that from your vantage point you could photograph the deployed flaps/slats, reverse thrust deflectors, and ground spoilers during the landing roll. That "dirty" configuration would be a nice pairing with this "clean" in flight shot. Even the composition would be dirtied by the ground elements. I'm going to have to try to remember to try that.

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    Re: From A Window Seat

    Tuna, I feel this is right as it is. The framing is great, composition tops, and the lighting here. . .could not have asked for it better. I like the golden lighted areas on the engine and the dark areas just further bring attention to the highlighted ones. Exposure right on. Great shot. A sort of abstract.
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