October Candy

[davidpweis]

Hi,
I'm a new photographer and poster. I took some pictures of my kid and was hoping to get some honest feedback on what I thought were good photo's.
Can you please comment, but be gentle.

Thanks

David

[dadas115]

I think that these pictures are very nice, especially the first one. You might also consider getting some tighter shots so you can really see the children’s expressions and try some different (unusual) angles.

Greg

[Seb]

Hi,
I'm a new photographer and poster. I took some pictures of my kid and was hoping to get some honest feedback on what I thought were good photo's.
Can you please comment, but be gentle.

Thanks

David

Hello David, welcome to the board!

I think that these are lively and nicely seen. I would like to see the background slightly out of focus (just enough to have your kids more detached from their surrouding yet the background remain distinguishable). Also, I think that you could experiment with color saturation. There is a relatively cold tint to your pictures and I guess that a warmer tone would suit the scene better.

That being said, I still like these.

Seb

[technicolor]

I really like the second one. I think by having the girl in the back it creates more depth and dimension, therefore making the shot more interesting.

[davidpweis]

Thanks you all; I really appreciate the feedback!
I like the bottom one myself.
:-D