What about this one?

[Seb]

Here is another one from sunday night which I tought was wrong at the first place until I seriously cropped the top of it. I feel that the pattern is of some interest. Does it work for you guy's? Any comments or suggestion would be appreciated.

F/10 1.3sec ISO 1600 28mm

Seb

[Elysian]

Nah Seb, this one doesn't cut I for me. Too much clutter, too much distractions, too blurry and no real focus point. Just a bad photograph, sorry, I'm just being honest.
I don't prefer the landscape format either, it doesn't really make the image stronger (at least for me), so it was an extra distraction.

I'm not putting you down as a photographer (I've seen some great images shot by you), it's just all about this photograph and nothing else. Trust me, I also shoot images like this just for the heck of it.

[Seb]

Nah Seb, this one doesn't cut I for me. Too much clutter, too much distractions, too blurry and no real focus point. Just a bad photograph, sorry, I'm just being honest.
I don't prefer the landscape format either, it doesn't really make the image stronger (at least for me), so it was an extra distraction.

I'm not putting you down as a photographer (I've seen some great images shot by you), it's just all about this photograph and nothing else. Trust me, I also shoot images like this just for the heck of it.

Hey JoeD,

No offense taken. I thank you for your honnesty. Quite frankly, I had some fun on the field shooting these yet I felt rather out of inspiration the whole time. At least, these are mistake to learn from.

regards

Seb