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I like this. I like your framing and the persons laying/basking in the glory here lol
My only hang up, or criticism on this is it appears too dark and contrasty. . .murky sorta.
The processing is haevy handed for my taste, but otherwise i like everything about this.
I'm with Gary on the foreground darkness Liban. Since you've already tweaked the S/H - tweak them a little more to give us the rest of the scene. Love the view BTW! :thumbsup:
Gary, I agree with you. This was almost a silhouette. because the sun is behind the tower. I had to bring out the shadows a lot. Also, I shot this JPEg and I think the colour balance was off. it looked very sunsety even if the sun was up there in the sky. Don't really know why. But I agree. Maybe this is screeming B&W? that way I wont' have to worry about the muddieness. I'll post a B&W version below. Thanks!
Cindy, first of all, welcome back! Thank you. I've revised the photo.
Liban
"There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela
Armando, how dare you! J/k. I know what you mean. thanks!
Anbesol, yeah I see that. It was a really dark silhouette since the sun was directly behind the tower and I had to process it hard like this. I pulled back in the b&w, I think most of you here want less of the HDR. thank you!
Seth, I'll definitely pull back on the final version of this. thanks!
Liban
"There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela
Liban, the color version for me works best here with the high contrast because there is better separation.
However, I tried bringing out the shadows significantly and there is lots to be had, and, I think it works best in b&w after doing that. Just seems to really work well with the subject matter and the comp.