Water Lily

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  • 09-06-2007, 06:20 AM
    southernfocus1
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    Water Lily
    Another request for critique. Please let me know how you think I can improve.
  • 09-06-2007, 08:16 AM
    MB1
    Re: Water Lily
    The color is off, a little too green/grey. Normally I like a nice close crop but I think that this one is a little too tight. It also looks like you shot in bright sunlight which is very difficult light (too much contrast so you end up with an image that doesn't have a full tonal range) try again on an overcast morning.
  • 09-06-2007, 09:00 AM
    southernfocus1
    Re: Water Lily
    ok...this is a straight image with no editing! with that info...I can back down the greens and darken the highlights. I can't try again, it is 2 hours away! ;)
  • 09-06-2007, 12:01 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: Water Lily
    Maybe a little more shade, but the composition and DOF seem fine.
  • 09-06-2007, 09:57 PM
    gahspidy
    Re: Water Lily
    Hi Jennifer,
    The background (bg) is nicely out of focus and sets off the subject well. The framing is fine with me, but MB1 has apoint about the colors. Tweak it a little , but not too much.