Wanna try me?

[mycr0ft]

I take this picture in a model photo contest...

[GB1]

Hmmm.. very appropriate title. Enticing, great illumination of her face. Good lighting of her black leather outfit too. I wish her fingers were a little more spread out though, and the lit up background area is distracting (you can fix this in post processing fairly easily).

Ps - she looks a little rough.

[mycr0ft]

thanks for your comment sir
it was taken in a mall, so there are many things that quiet distracting. what kind of processing do u suggest? blur it? darken it?

[GB1]

I wouldn't blur or darken it, but I would selectively darken that area behind her to eliminate that distraction. I might sharpen it a little also. Good luck,

GB

[mycr0ft]

ok,thanks for the advice,ill try to do it
PS. Im a beginner, especially in editing ^^

[NoKnees]

Definitely a great photo of her. The area behind her to the right could use a little darkening, as noted by GB1..... With that area a little darker, should would stand out even better...

Good shot for anyone, beginner or not!

[jetrim]

Agree with above comments, but be careful not to go so dark that you lose the back of her head!