Walking into the light...

[PlantedTao]

Well, I went back to this pub to try some of the suggestions from my last post.
This is a quicky from the darkroom...so I would like some suggestions on whether to proceed or scrap...
And just an overall critique would be nice as well

Oh, and there is the weird smudge thing in the middle, that would be from my high quality scanner, its not on the print.