The Walk

Here's a pic i took at Brandywine Creek State Park, any comments/critique/anything having nothing to do with it welcome! :)

http://www.flyerspage.net/albums/alb...lk11.sized.jpg

Technically, there's nothing wrong with this shot. Great black and white, and very strong tones. Composition is pretty good, yet my eyes wander too much as there doesn't seem to be a strong enough subject matter here. If it's the road, the main log in the centre is overpowering it.

Just my two cents,

Jared

Very nice. I like the sun peaking out from behind the tree. However, it seems a bit underexposed, at least on my monitor. Just a touch brighter would bring out some of the texture of the shot.

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Originally Posted by drjimmy42

Very nice. I like the sun peaking out from behind the tree. However, it seems a bit underexposed, at least on my monitor. Just a touch brighter would bring out some of the texture of the shot.

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I agree with you--fix the exposure and you have a great photo. I probably would have metered about have way down the road.

Larry C.

Very nice compostion, I feel the lonliness of the road, the isolation of the area - somewhat dark and forboding --- you might be able to brighten it up a tad in post exposure processing.

I also like the photo, but in my humble opinion agree with the exposure comments below. However I think there is a lot of interest in this scene. I like the way the light falls on the empty table and chairs and I think the cobblestone/rocky texture in the forground of the road might add something to the shot. I also enjoy the lonly and empty feel.
Otherwise nice photo!
Michael

hey...sry i've been busy...thx for everyones replies...

On this particular picture i actually wanted to get the dark lonely silhouette feeling.....but i think you guys are right and could use a little bit brightening up. when i have a little more time i'll do that and post it back here.

thx again for the comments made so far.