on a walk

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  • 01-11-2007, 06:20 AM
    veggie
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    on a walk
    As I was walking this poped into view/mind.
    C&C welcome, Thanks!
  • 01-11-2007, 07:40 AM
    Chunk
    Re: on a walk
    I think it would be better with the subjects more off center if possible. The chimney seems outlandishly huge for that size building making the scene more interesting. The lettering makes the image kinda hard to evaluate.
  • 01-11-2007, 02:30 PM
    trog100
    Re: on a walk
    its "pretty" i quite like it.. nice colours.. nice composition.. its okay..

    trog
  • 01-11-2007, 05:06 PM
    veggie
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    Re: on a walk
    Thanks! here is one with little letters
  • 01-11-2007, 06:38 PM
    trog100
    Re: on a walk
    its a nice picture.. no real message but nice.. also pretty hard to find things wrong with.. which is why u havnt had many comments..

    it isnt "arty" enough for some but technally too well done to "critique"..

    it seems to me a fuzzy (read poorly done) but arty picture gets a wow.. but a technically well done one dosnt.. try hitting the black and white filter.. its bound to to get comments then..

    i like it anyway.. he he

    trog

    ps.. in fact it makes a refreshing change..
  • 01-11-2007, 07:04 PM
    livin4lax09
    Re: on a walk
    looks a little crooked, may just be distortion though. exposure, colors, and sharpness are all dead on, but it just lacks interest.