waiting for the A

Hi,
here is a "portrait" with Sarah (wife) as a "model" waiting for the A train back home..
any good.!?
C.&C. welcome
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/c...DSC_0033-1.jpg

here is another same day but on the way to the city.. ;)
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/c...DSC_0010-1.jpg

I like your compositions but I want something in the images (like her face or hair) to be sharply in focus.

I agree, unless intentional, the eyes should be the focusing point. Otherwise, they are quite nice portraits. Good compositions, and depth of field.

I do like the contrast/tones more in the top image than the bottom.

Well done.

I like them but like two the best.
I'd crop from the right up to her hair and maybe into half of it and also from the top on the first one.
Nice shots!