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    View from the Top of the Toboggan Slide


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    Re: View from the Top of the Toboggan Slide

    Hmmmm. Strange angle alright... I wish the sky was a little bluer, or perhaps a person or two was sliding down as you snapped it. The trees in the center seem to be either getting in the way or create a nice division. Probably the later, but it would be nice if there was a person on the steps and say two kids on the slide.

    Don, you have (had) a great op here! A shot with a slow SS as you are sliding down the slide. You'll need to get one of those sealing bags for your camera first of course, but what a great shot that would be eh!?
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    Re: View from the Top of the Toboggan Slide

    I agree with GB1, another element would help. But I think that you balanced the exposure fairly good. There seems to be some haloing around the trees . It looks as though winter is ending and the ice is melting, so maybe the image doesn't need people in it?
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    Re: View from the Top of the Toboggan Slide

    Thanks guys. I had to burn in detail of the pond or it would have been burned completely out.

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