trying a portrait

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  • 10-26-2004, 09:27 AM
    jcharris
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    trying a portrait
    I have been trying this portrait photo of this little girl .
    Could i ask your opinion of the following ?
    Does the photo look flat ?
    Did i crop it to much ?
    If one do a portrait is it a good idea to try to get so much possible into the frame , and to crop some of the shoulder ( or head ) for that instance ?

    All your comments would be appreciated !

    Regards
    james
  • 10-26-2004, 11:13 AM
    dadas115
    Re: trying a portrait
    I think the composition of this one is very nice. I might try using a larger aperture though to give a bit less DOF as the background might be taking away some from this shot. The other thing is that it appears that your WB might be a tad off. The monitor I am looking at is not calibrated so it might just be an issue with what I am seeing here but it looks a bit too red and the saturation looks a bit high. I would probably reduce the saturation, shift the color a bit to the blue end and up the contrast some.

    Greg
  • 10-26-2004, 11:39 AM
    simprini
    Re: trying a portrait
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by jcharris
    I have been trying this portrait photo of this little girl .
    Could i ask your opinion of the following ?
    Does the photo look flat ?
    Did i crop it to much ?
    If one do a portrait is it a good idea to try to get so much possible into the frame , and to crop some of the shoulder ( or head ) for that instance ?

    All your comments would be appreciated !

    Regards
    james


    I have to agree with Greg, the DOF is a litlle bit distracting and its red on my monitor too, but it's ease fix in Photoshop CS use the ( image ajustment photo filter and cooling filter 80 or 82 affter that play a litle bit with levels and you are ready to go ) good lucky.
    Titano Cruz :)
  • 10-27-2004, 08:18 AM
    jcharris
    Re: trying a portrait
    Thank you Greg and Titano for your time to look and comment .

    I am glad you like the composition , i have been working on that .
    I agree with with you on the DOF , i will go with a little less DOF . That background is taking away some of the photo.

    Your comments are really positive and i can take a lot from it !!

    Regards
    james
  • 10-27-2004, 02:25 PM
    Pippi
    Re: trying a portrait
    If you want more opinions then.... I just wanted to add that if it is possible I would try to keep the camera at the same height as her eys so that she doesn't have to look up.