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    "F" is for...



    Self Critiue: My focal point was in on the headlight. Kinda hard, it was MF as it hunted a little. I cloned a car out as well. Is it noticeable?

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    Re: "F" is for...

    The tilt of the car bothers me, the overall is a bit to dark and contrasty. I'd like to see it with a slightly warmer white balance.

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    Re: "F" is for...

    Yes, I think some straightening would help and a bit brighter.
    It really bothers me that I'm not sure which one this is.
    Do you remember the bird that spelled FORD with its mouth?
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    Re: "F" is for...

    Was the car on the left hand side of the image half way up vertically? There appears to be a bit of a grey blob and am not quite sure what it could be??

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    Re: "F" is for...

    Pretty sure this is the old Falcon as the badge suggests, looks to small to be a Fairlane and not round enough to be a Futura. If I had to guess where the clone job was, I'd say probably where the curbing wiggles under the first tree on the left. Looks like some artifacts in the grass right next to the tree trunk.

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    Re: "F" is for...

    This car and scene definitely has potential. I also find the darkness of it a bit disappointing though, and it looks a bit too 'suburbia'. Maybe if you could pull it into a studio .. .

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    Re: "F" is for...

    I'd be doing more than pulling it into a studio, try my driveway!

    Here is an unedited version of the photo.



    My cloning skills aren't that fantastic just yet. I guess it's practice and patience.
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