Tom x 2

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  • 04-12-2008, 12:39 PM
    Ptax
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    Tom x 2
    Visited the Nature Center today. I would have liked to have been down lower but had to shoot from behind the glass in the viewing area.

    Critique appreciated.
  • 04-12-2008, 01:32 PM
    Dubbs5050
    Re: Tom x 2
    ha...these things look funny ... very cool birds with great color....but I think they should be centered....that wood thing does nothing for this photo, except for take away from the birds....maybe sho0t at a lower angle too, although I am not sure how often you encounter these things....maybe a crop will do for now.
  • 04-12-2008, 05:12 PM
    Ptax
    Re: Tom x 2
    Thanks for the suggestions. Here in the Ozarks these aren't too rare a beast, but seldom do you catch them putting on quite such a display.
  • 04-12-2008, 09:33 PM
    Lori11
    Re: Tom x 2
    Great photo LOL they look like bookends :D
  • 04-13-2008, 02:34 PM
    GB1
    Re: Tom x 2
    Wow, this is different, even funny. How did you get such a great shot of Bush and Chenney? (lol). They almost seem like they're obeying your orders to go over there and stand up straight for a photo. I didn't know turkeys were so obedient!

    It's a good shot btw but I wonder if there was another angle where you could have gotten a more supportive background. If you were limited by glass, and probably a viewport, probably not. It's good for what it is though. Might also be able to use them as source material for a future collage/ cut and paste expt.

    G
  • 04-27-2008, 05:52 AM
    Ptax
    Re: Tom x 2
    Thanks for taking the time to comment. Your feedback is appreciated.
  • 04-27-2008, 08:31 AM
    polarbeardiggers
    Re: Tom x 2
    I think its a not bad shot at all, you some how impressed the birds for them to show off like that, we have a protected park not far out of city limits where they roam free,i have several shots even three females with their chicks running amuck,. I would of like to see a more side view of their beaks and beards with all their splendid coloring.perhaps more at their level would make the perfect shot.
  • 04-27-2008, 07:35 PM
    Ptax
    Re: Tom x 2
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by polarbeardiggers
    . . .you some how impressed the birds for them to show off like that,

    Alas, I cannot take any credit for that. Nature and the four hens in the vicinity were the toms' impetus for the show.
  • 04-28-2008, 02:27 AM
    Don Schaeffer
    Re: Tom x 2
    I love the composition of this. You obviously thought about it. The vivid contrast of the birds against the background really works. Of course I think it would be better if that pole grate thing weren't there, but hey. Is there a little too much green--a green bias to he color or is that me?
  • 04-28-2008, 10:30 AM
    MB1
    Re: Tom x 2
    I'm thinking it is actually "Tom x 3" and you need a tighter crop as all the stuff on the left adds nothing and reduces the impact of the birds on the viewer.