" A Time to Depart "

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  • 08-06-2008, 04:37 PM
    New England Moments
    " A Time to Depart "
    Going for an old look here , may not be your thing, but thought I would throw it out for critique.

    Camera Model: PENTAX K200D

    Focal Length: 30.6mm (35mm equivalent: 46mm...
    Exposure Time: 0.017 s (1/60) Aperture: f/4.5
    ISO Equiv.: 1600
    Metering Mode: matrix
    Exposure: Manual


    http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m...ador4/tone.jpg
  • 08-06-2008, 07:00 PM
    Frog
    Re: " A Time to Depart "
    I have a hard time critiquing images that are too tall for my screen but I think this works quite well.
    I do think it could be wider unless you had to crop something out on the left.
    Good b/w tones...Did you convert it?
  • 08-06-2008, 09:00 PM
    Anbesol
    Re: " A Time to Depart "
    You made that 1600 create some great looking B/W noise. I usually detest noise but I really like what it does in this shot. The noisy section on the right hand side is a bit distracting though, don't know why the change in tones like that, it looks very strange - did that come from processing or was it shot like that? I would definitely clone/heal out the wood on the very right side. Good stuff.
  • 08-07-2008, 06:46 AM
    gahspidy
    Re: " A Time to Depart "
    Very nice. I like that it was not shot straight on. the angle lends some interesting shadow. I also see the strange and abrupt changes in tone and light on the right. . .as if a small area was selected and adjusted too much
    Very good otherwise .
  • 08-28-2008, 11:34 AM
    shootme
    Re: " A Time to Depart "
    Ditto Gary, love the clock, wouldn't mind hanging it at home
  • 08-28-2008, 02:16 PM
    Overbeyond
    Re: " A Time to Depart "
    There is a lot of what I might call Photoshop/manipulation damage on this image, especially on the rh side and around the clock and kiosk areas. This makes the end result poor and it is a pity because there is some potential otherwise. Maybe worth preparing this one again.