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    The roof! The roof! the roof isn't on fire!



    Sorry about the tittle. It's not funny at all!

    I shot this in the village of Melk, Austria. Does it work?

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    Re: The roof! The roof! the roof isn't on fire!

    I like it, just a little soft on the focusing. If this is from a scanned print, I can understand, but if it's digital, maybe a little USM to fix it up. To me this is noticable right on the first area of the roof.

    Nice shot and simple colors,

    Jared

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    Re: The roof! The roof! the roof isn't on fire!

    I think a lower angle of view would have worked better here. Then maybe we could have seen the ceiling, cloisters and that nice golden coloured door at the end all in one.
    Nice all the same though.
    Tom
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    Re: The roof! The roof! the roof isn't on fire!

    It is at times like these, that you wish you had a wide angle lens ! I really like the color of this picture. The lovely cream/beige is very nice. Like the others said, a lower angle would have been nice. This would have placed the lamp slightly lower, and would have made it the focus of the vanishing point. Other than that, a very good picture.

    Drew
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