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    The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    Hello everyone, my name is John, I am an experimental photographer =)

    This is Tania, shes likely to be the cutest girl ever

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    Please allow me the opportunity to share about my experimental work.

    As an artist, my work is about expressing a person’s character using impressions generated from photos and words and piecing them together to form a bigger picture.

    Rather than on a per-picture basis, kindly consider my work through an overall point of view.

    The full length of my experimental work can be found here

    I would be grateful for any feedback at all as they are valuable for my experiment’s progress. Thank you =)

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    These are nice pictures of Tania, John. Tania can provide good facial expressions and body language. I had a look at you experimental stuff too only to find more of the same without anything really new or interesting; but definitely very cute pictures of the cutest girl ever.
    But with Tania there is loads of potential with a little more original approach.
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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    Nice set, I really like it.

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    To be honest, I'm curious what the experiment is.
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    Feel free to edit my images for critique, just let me know what you did.

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    I looked at the rest of your work on this, I liked the way you made and chose many of your exposures and lighting conditions, and the hues you chose to use were nice. One thing particularly bothers me though - her eye color seems unnatural, like its either colored contacts or edited saturation and pupils/catchlights. They also seem large, but she might just have large eyes.. There were a couple that you included which the focal plane was too far back and the subject was jumping forward out of focus. Too many super closeups of the eyes, though that's my stylistic preference.

    # 1 is excellent, beautiful expression and face. 2 and 3 are very good, . In 4 she looks like a nervous child and in 5 she looks maybe a bit ditzy, and a little posed in both.

    Ahh I see its your first post here. Welcome to the forums.

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    Quote Originally Posted by Overbeyond
    These are nice pictures of Tania, John. Tania can provide good facial expressions and body language. I had a look at you experimental stuff too only to find more of the same without anything really new or interesting; but definitely very cute pictures of the cutest girl ever.
    But with Tania there is loads of potential with a little more original approach.
    haha thank you

    hmm ... interesting, how may I convey greater originality ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Tyson L. Sparks
    Nice set, I really like it.
    thank you =)

    Quote Originally Posted by n8
    To be honest, I'm curious what the experiment is.
    well .. the experiment is a sort of personality collage. Its a bit related to psychology as its about emotions and how we express them.

    The theory is that each of us are unique and individual is because we all express the same emotions differently and that is what makes us different from one another.

    I hope this makes sense for you haha

    the point of me getting feedback is that i want to know wheater this makes sense or im just crazy

    Quote Originally Posted by Anbesol
    I looked at the rest of your work on this, I liked the way you made and chose many of your exposures and lighting conditions, and the hues you chose to use were nice. One thing particularly bothers me though - her eye color seems unnatural, like its either colored contacts or edited saturation and pupils/catchlights. They also seem large, but she might just have large eyes.. There were a couple that you included which the focal plane was too far back and the subject was jumping forward out of focus. Too many super closeups of the eyes, though that's my stylistic preference.

    # 1 is excellent, beautiful expression and face. 2 and 3 are very good, . In 4 she looks like a nervous child and in 5 she looks maybe a bit ditzy, and a little posed in both.

    Ahh I see its your first post here. Welcome to the forums.
    haha yeh, she is using contacts and lashes to enhance her eye size

    yes, I am really sad when my photos go out of focus, the moment is lost there =(

    I also realize that the subject shows the most natural expression when shot within the first 5 seconds the pose was made =/ sometimes i fumble and miss them

    hehehhe in asia ditzy = acting cute XD

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    Quote Originally Posted by pansy789
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    thank you =)

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    Can You Wrap Her Up And Send Her To Me?

    Great Pictures, Though I Would Have Been Obsessed With Those Eyes More~Nods~

    They Are Like Alien Eyes And Require Hundreds Of Shots Of Them! LOL
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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    Quote Originally Posted by RoxyRNAB
    Can You Wrap Her Up And Send Her To Me?

    Great Pictures, Though I Would Have Been Obsessed With Those Eyes More~Nods~

    They Are Like Alien Eyes And Require Hundreds Of Shots Of Them! LOL
    lolz no but you can come visit her in Asia XD

    hahahahah eye exploration, that sounds interesting ...

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    Love your photography ideas! As I have been researching things about photography I was really inspired of what you had shared in this post.

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    John - if thats the experiment, why is it that you used the same scene pose as you did with other girls?

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    Quote Originally Posted by SHbaker11
    Love your photography ideas! As I have been researching things about photography I was really inspired of what you had shared in this post.
    Thank you for your kind words =)

    What might you be searching for ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Anbesol
    John - if thats the experiment, why is it that you used the same scene pose as you did with other girls?
    To establish a standard =)

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    John, I noticed that every one of your posts has been contained within this thread. The common practice of photo critique is to critique at least 5 other photo's per every photo you put up for critique. Try offering your critique in other threads.

    *edit - I mean per thread, not per photo.
    Last edited by Anbesol; 04-28-2011 at 10:41 AM.

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    Quote Originally Posted by Anbesol
    John, I noticed that every one of your posts has been contained within this thread. The common practice of photo critique is to critique at least 5 other photo's per every photo you put up for critique. Try offering your critique in other threads.

    *edit - I mean per thread, not per photo.
    Alright, thank you =)

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    I love brunettes, but I also love blue eyes. So this one really got me. Hahah. Good shots!

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    Re: The Cutest Girl I Have Ever Met ~ Tania Z.

    Lovely shots of a stunning model

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