Mid-summer Day

[realworld]

I welcome any and all feedback on how I could have done this better....

[Dylan8i]

i think making her left eye (right side of image) alittle bit more visible would make this stronger, but don;t show the whole thing, keep it mysterious. but other wise its very good i like the mood it sets.

[realworld]

Dylan8i- Totally hear you...thanks for the compliments!