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Thread: Swingset

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    Swingset

    not much to this picture, when i see it i think emptiness, so i made it b&w, let me know what you guys think.



    Thanks.

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    Re: Swingset

    Hi Mark. I like the concept you are trying, but two things really distract me when I look at this image. The first is your copyright info. It should be smaller and usually at the bottom of the photo so it is not so distracting. The second is that it seems to me there should be more space below the swing that is the closest to the camera. Maybe angle the swings across the frame a bit more. The shadows could give it a nice repeating pattern if they were all visible.

    I love swings. In my opinion people should never allow themselves to be too old to swing.
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