Sunset

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  • 01-15-2008, 02:34 AM
    yairh20
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    Sunset
    A sunset near where I learn

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    please comment
  • 01-15-2008, 06:26 AM
    MB1
    Re: Sunset
    Interesting colors, great sky and a pretty good composition.

    I wish the Powerline on the left edge of the frame wasn't there. I'm not sure what you were focusing on, the treeline looks a little soft to me.

    I don't have any issues with your composition as it is but you could crop about half of the foreground off from the bottom of the frame to make this a lighter image and to make the sky even more dramatic.

    This one is good.
  • 03-14-2008, 07:58 AM
    yairh20
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    Re: Sunset
    Thank you! sorry it's taken me so long to answer i haven't been on the forum for a while!
    how's this?

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  • 03-14-2008, 08:09 AM
    Cynthia Blue
    Re: Sunset
    Beautiful, I love the tree line and the colors are wonderful. Looks better without the power line.
  • 03-15-2008, 09:53 AM
    yairh20
    Re: Sunset
    Thank you!
  • 03-15-2008, 10:05 AM
    CLKunst
    Re: Sunset
    Well this is nothing short of spectacular! Nothing to critique now that you removed the power line. Just excellent.
  • 03-15-2008, 10:11 AM
    yairh20
    Re: Sunset
    Thank you very much!