Sunday Afternoon

[lalotafoya]

First image is unedited,
2nd i framed it and added more color.
any thoughts, comments, suggestion.

[Dylan8i]

i think i'd like one inbetween, the yellow is just to overpowering in the second one, not in the sky but in the foreground. nice shot though, lots of action, but still simple.

[Greg McCary]

I'm with Dylan on the color, of the two I like the first. But it is a very beautiful picture.

[belloscurita]

I really like your depth in this picture, the beach really just seems to go on and on. I like how it seems so busy and so active yet still relaxed and vacationish.

But I would also tend to agree with the others, the second is a little bit to yellow for my taste. I really like the color the sand has in the first one actually... Also maybe try cleaning up the white (dust?) spots over on the right side and that big one in the middle, I find that one in the middle kinda distracting.

[lalotafoya]

Thank you all for your advice and comments. I will make one with all the corrections on it.

[lalotafoya]

Here is the new and improve photo.

[Dylan8i]

wow what a difference, i really like the yellow sky with the palm trees and birds against it. however i;m nto sure about the large yellow beam of light covering most of the people and beach. it might grow on me or not. i'll let you know.

[LeeIs]

I still like the first one. Weird kind of shot, packed with action, there's even a parachuter in the distance. I like it. I think it might be better if you took out the yellow cast all together.