Are you gonna finish that, sir?

[AgingEyes]

A quick shot.





Thank you for looking ! Comments welcome !

[Adamo]

Interesting and fun shot, the title suits it fine. I would have liked it better from a lower perspective, as seen from the seagull. And the look on the guys face distracts me a bit.

[armando_m]

wonderful street shot

how to improve it ? without a reshoot maybe b&W ?

[GB1]

Black and white! Black and white!

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[skitheast]

It would look great black and white, pretty funny

[dancer]

I agree with Adamo.

A lower angle as well as maybe moving the bird closer to the center of the frame might help the overall composition. The men seem to be a bit out of the story being so close to the left of the frame and the man eating has his eyes closed. This also might be a fun situation to play with the depth of field.

I would have got a little lower, taken a few steps to the right and focused on the food with a wider aperture.

Just some thoughts, hope that helps.