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    Stealth...

    All comment appreciated. Thanks.
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    Re: Stealth...

    The out-of-focus foreground is a major problem and there is too much background. A guideline for animal shots by the way is get the eyes and make sure that they are significantly bright. Good effort, but a really difficult shot to get perfect.

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    Re: Stealth...

    Quote Originally Posted by Ronnoco
    The out-of-focus foreground is a major problem and there is too much background. A guideline for animal shots by the way is get the eyes and make sure that they are significantly bright. Good effort, but a really difficult shot to get perfect.

    Ronnoco
    Thanks for looking it over Ronnoco. I actually chose this composition on purpose with the blurred foreground. I wanted a different approach to shooting these common city animals. These squirrels are almost as common as crows and pigeons around here.

    But if it doesn't work....it just don't work telling by the huge response this picture has

    Thanks again
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    Re: Stealth...

    Personaly I like it. it holds my interest. Using elements to "block" the subject can add mystery to a shot and is used all the time by cinematographers. very hard in the field to get this exactly right, but having the squirrel appear larger in the shot in relation to the foreground / background would help a lot. this effect can be achieved by using a longer lens. the other thing i would have tried (assuming our critter is behaving) would be to frame with grass or branches just above and below (still allowing them to obstruct the main subject)

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    Re: Stealth...

    Maybe try a little more sharpening or bumping up the contrast? To be truthful it just doesn't hold my attention.

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    Re: Stealth...

    I would like it better if the squirrels head was higher above the blurred foreground.

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    Re: Stealth...

    Thanks for all the comments. I truly appreciate it.
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