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I like it. I think you framed this very well, and captured the right moment as he is in deep concentration. Exposure is very good. Very good overall composition,Jurgen. Well done.
It's OK but I think it would be stronger if you had gotten closer in, showing more of his expression (eyes). Or a little less of a straight on angle.
Two edits here, one of them crazy. Somehow a black n white to color seems appropriate too.
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It's OK but I think it would be stronger if you had gotten closer in, showing more of his expression (eyes). Or a little less of a straight on angle.
GB,,,the problem here was the spraypainter was using "real" paint....I didn't have any protective clothing and definitely didn't want my 20D splattered with blue paint..As is was I was about a metre away from him..
BTW,,,your tight edit just doesn't work for me..
Jurgen
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Please don't edit my images without my permission.
I thought the original photo was as tightly cropped as it needed to be. btw, I hope you had Jurgens permission to edit the images.
I didn't have permission, but figured from past exchanges that he wouldn't mind.
Jurgen, did I offend you?
Btw, I think the ideal shot here, unattainable because of the issue you described, would have been a wide angle very close in to the car and just in front of the area he was sparying, looking back at him. Of course, your lens would catch a cloud of paint but I can envision a really neat shot like that.
Gb
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I didn't have permission, but figured from past exchanges that he wouldn't mind.
Jurgen, did I offend you?
Btw, I think the ideal shot here, unattainable because of the issue you described, would have been a wide angle very close in to the car and just in front of the area he was sparying, looking back at him. Of course, your lens would catch a cloud of paint but I can envision a really neat shot like that.
Gb
GB,,water off a duck's back...It takes more than an edit to offend me.. :thumbsup:
Jurgen
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Please don't edit my images without my permission.
I like the original the best, this is a great subject and I agree with Gary on the guys concentration. You are very good at capturing ones character. I really enjoy your people pictures.
Greg
I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..