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Thread: Read to Achieve

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    Read to Achieve

    This was a shot with a student at Eastern University. What do you think? How could i have enhanced these shots whether through angles, colors/Lighting or other photographic techniques?

    Shot with a Canon 5D w/ the 70-200mm 2.8 L series

    -Dave Christenson
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    Email at ChristensonPhoto@gmail.com

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    Re: Read to Achieve

    Quite a lot of photographs in this post to comment on properly but of the bunch the first two (particularly the first) work best for me. The last two don't seem as sharp as they should be (particularly when using that lens!). Fantastic blossom and I like the contemplative expression on the subject's face on the first image.

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    Re: Read to Achieve

    I agree, these are grat shots and i too love the blossams but i like the composition of the third picture the best i just wish it were sharper. did you use manual focus??

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    Re: Read to Achieve

    The first is definitely the best. the greens are a lot more vibrant than the other and It has more feeling to it.

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    Re: Read to Achieve

    I think I like 3 the best overall, but they're all really great shots. I like his expression in 1.

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