Space

[Alexandre da Veiga]

I am going to try to re-shoot this, but I need some points-of-view first.

Do you feel like there is too much space between the two main elements?

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[draymorton]

Not for me. Very cool image.

The human subject makes it for me.

[geraldb]

It is a well executed image, BUT the image elements here are not interesting enough for the viewer. Actually the man is allright as a backdrop but I wish you chose a subject more interesting than the sticker.
I find this a good example of an image that would look interesting as a small icon but disappointing when enlarged. To build up audience for our galleries, we should avoid the disappointment factor.

[Lava Lamp]

I like the dilapidated Federal Reserve sticker -- symbolic of the state of the US economy, right? The guy walking by provides a great contrast. I find this an interesting and satisfying image.

[LeeIs]

I also like it. To me it says 'federal reserve walking away with american tax payer money'. I like it as is. I think it works. Everyone that looks at it will come up with their little story of what it says to them. For that, I think it's very good.

[Alexandre da Veiga]

LeeIs, that is what I was going for.
Did you guys noticed the man behind bars?

[Greg McCary]

It would be hard to beat this one. Nice conversion and timing.

[Alexandre da Veiga]

I spent a pretty good amount of time shooting this. Shot around 20 photos, but most had 2 or more people, and if they were alone, they did not had the right wardrobe.

[GB1]

I think there's a bit of a disconnect there, probably due to the excessive space (like you mentioned). Good concept though.

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[draymorton]

I really think the guy is perfect. Not only is the wardrobe right, but he's just such an interesting character. Looks like Tarantino In a Blues Brothers getup.

[armando_m]

This makes a very nice street shot

it would not make sense without the guy

if shot at a different angle to reduce the space , the sticker would be hard to read

and nice b&W conversion too!

[Alexandre da Veiga]

This makes a very nice street shot

it would not make sense without the guy

if shot at a different angle to reduce the space , the sticker would be hard to read

Exactly.

Thank you for the feedback guys,

[LeeIs]

No, I didn't see the guy behind bars until you pointed him out