Somewhere in Bavaria

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  • 04-14-2011, 02:20 PM
    Phototravellers
    Somewhere in Bavaria
  • 04-14-2011, 02:23 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: Somewhere in Bavaria
    The composition is really strong. Maybe if the light was hitting the barn from the other side? Still a nice photo. Have you tried a B&W?
  • 04-14-2011, 11:32 PM
    hminx
    Re: Somewhere in Bavaria
    I find the dead grass detracts a bit, maybe crop to the base of the second pole in, clone out the first pole and crop a bit of the right.
  • 04-15-2011, 06:59 AM
    arne saknussen
    Re: Somewhere in Bavaria
    Really nice composition, the sky, the road, the posts and even the distant hills and such. I do agree with the dead grass being a little distracting mainly because there is too much of it.
  • 04-15-2011, 10:13 AM
    LeeIs
    Re: Somewhere in Bavaria
    The composition is great. I like it. I wish the bottom left was just green grass, but you can't do anything about that. The exposure is great also. overall very well done.
  • 04-15-2011, 10:23 AM
    Asmarlak
    Re: Somewhere in Bavaria
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by hminx
    I find the dead grass detracts a bit, maybe crop to the base of the second pole in, clone out the first pole and crop a bit of the right.

    I think it is much easier to make the dead grass greener.
  • 04-15-2011, 10:37 AM
    armando_m
    Re: Somewhere in Bavaria
    Beautiful light and composition

    As improvement ?
    I think the pole in the front calls for too much attention and probably I would have experimented trying to make it smaller, or shoot from the other side of the poles as I think the main subjects are the trees and the cabin , not the poles, which may just guide the eyes, but the road alone can serve as such a guide
  • 04-16-2011, 03:36 PM
    Phototravellers
    Re: Somewhere in Bavaria
    hi guys,

    thanks for your suggestions. next time, I'll try to make it still better
  • 04-22-2011, 04:33 AM
    Bright Eye
    Re: Somewhere in Bavaria
    Hi Guys,

    Great Composition that is. I really appreciate.
    Quote:

    I think it is much easier to make the dead grass greener.
    I Think Amarlak suggest you a nice way to make dead parts greener or whatever you think Through out very easy steps like 1, 2, 3
  • 04-24-2011, 04:17 AM
    Florian13
    Re: Somewhere in Bavaria
    Nice picture, it is as in France