One Hot Night

[PhilF]

This was from last night's shoot at my friend's backyard.

c & c appreciated.

[PhilF]

no one wants to give me any c & c?

here's one more

[CLKunst]

Hi Phil,

Just a few things I notice:

I wish she was on the other side of the frame. Her head seems to be turned too far away from the camera and I'd like to see more of her face.

I don't like all of the clingy hairs that are wreathing her face. While sweaty wet hair stuck to a white shirt and her neck do imply hot it just looks sloppy, sticky and uncomfortable.

Her left breast seems over exposed, probably could have used a second light source so you could have notched down the key light a little more.


She's truly a lovely model and I think you have accurately conveyed the intent of your title.

[PhilF]

Hi Phil,

Just a few things I notice:

I wish she was on the other side of the frame. Her head seems to be turned too far away from the camera and I'd like to see more of her face.

I don't like all of the clingy hairs that are wreathing her face. While sweaty wet hair stuck to a white shirt and her neck do imply hot it just looks sloppy, sticky and uncomfortable.

Her left breast seems over exposed, probably could have used a second light source so you could have notched down the key light a little more.


She's truly a lovely model and I think you have accurately conveyed the intent of your title.

the pp made the top brighter... I should have caught that... originally it's not overexposed.

thank you...really appreciate it.

[PhilF]

here's one without PP..

[GB1]

She's definitely modeling material, but probably not in the traditional product-endorsement sense, maybe more for a rebel chick scene. You could have her dress up like a biker, a pirate, or ?, something crazy. I actually like when she's looking away a little better, for she seems just a little too upset straight on (let me guess, she didn't want to POSE! ). Hard to get the white shirt not to blow out against all that tan skin and dark hair, so you might want to be a little more mindful of her outfit.

GB

[PhilF]

She's definitely modeling material, but probably not in the traditional product-endorsement sense, maybe more for a rebel chick scene. You could have her dress up like a biker, a pirate, or ?, something crazy. I actually like when she's looking away a little better, for she seems just a little too upset straight on (let me guess, she didn't want to POSE! ). Hard to get the white shirt not to blow out against all that tan skin and dark hair, so you might want to be a little more mindful of her outfit.

GB

thanks G. Here is how she looks like...


yes... she doesn't smile.