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Thread: Shy

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    Shy

    Taken at the races today ...

    Also, if you want to see some panning shots of the races ...

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    Re: Shy

    Nice catch. I wonder if you could deepen the blacks a touch?
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    Re: Shy

    +1.................

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    Re: Shy

    very good. I agree with n8. a tad deeper blacks.
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    Re: Shy

    This is very cool...love the face of the old car peeking out of its garage like its anxious to get out and play.
    Wish the guy was not caught in the bg. Deepening blacks may help with a bit more punch, but I'd hate to lose any of the shadow detail we have in the areas under the car chassis and the tires....I'd vote to leave it be.,.
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    Re: Shy

    I may get ambitious one of these days and try and clone the guy out. I was waiting for them to move, but they were working on the back of the car, and it could have taken a long time (or never) for them to do so.

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    Re: Shy

    Here is another cloned version ...I think I like this one better ....
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    Re: Shy

    yep, this pops. good job.

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    Re: Shy

    Heh, very cool. I think maybe the crop should be tightened a bit.

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