The Shell

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  • 11-25-2008, 06:55 AM
    Giova
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    The Shell
    Hi guys. Did this in my garden. I loved the position of this minute shell between the leaves of a rose. Not entirely happy with it.... What do you think? thank you for your input.

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  • 11-25-2008, 03:48 PM
    skinnymachink
    Re: The Shell
    Nice shot very abstract feel to it. I would have changed the angle, the shell looks a bit flat it would work better for me if it had a bit more dimension.
  • 11-25-2008, 03:50 PM
    Shooter Tiff
    Re: The Shell
    Ya I agree. Maybe a smaller aperture would have helped.
  • 11-25-2008, 06:58 PM
    jetrim
    Re: The Shell
    The idea is sound, but I agree w/ Tiff that a bit more DOF would have made this a better shot
  • 11-25-2008, 09:45 PM
    GB1
    Re: The Shell
    Not only more DOF, but possibly better focus and/or less camera shake, as I am not sure any spot in the image is truly in focus. You might be able to sharpen it up a bit and see what you get.

    Nice colors btw. I think I might lighten the shot a tad too, say 1/3rd of an f stop.

    G
  • 11-26-2008, 06:15 AM
    Giova
    Re: The Shell
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by GB1
    Not only more DOF, but possibly better focus and/or less camera shake, as I am not sure any spot in the image is truly in focus. You might be able to sharpen it up a bit and see what you get.

    Nice colors btw. I think I might lighten the shot a tad too, say 1/3rd of an f stop.

    G

    HI GB1, indeed I did not have a tripod there!! Will try with sharpening it a bit. Thank you
  • 11-27-2008, 09:28 PM
    dannn
    Re: The Shell
    I agree, smaller aperature. Shell is too sunk into the flower.
  • 11-29-2008, 06:51 AM
    shootme
    Re: The Shell
    Great thinking to put this together, I like the creativity, well done. S