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Thread: deserted past.

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    Senior Member polarbeardiggers's Avatar
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    deserted past.

    shot with the nikon d50, came across a old one room school house called " three sisters school." and to the east of it was the two outhouses for the other two sisters,
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    Re: deserted past.

    it would have been nicer if you captured all of it..composed with a little more room. They are both interesting but somewhat cramped...you are posting a variety of different shots..but are you giving them enough pre and post processing
    Please ask to edit photos and I'll do the same! :thumbsup:
    Thx, Rod
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    Re: deserted past.

    I agree with Rod. They are nice but cropped a little tight. You clipped the left part of the roof on the first one. It looks as though there may have been a distraction on the left. How about a B&W conversion? Could be interesting?
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    Re: deserted past.

    Great subjects, sky and lighting. . .just cropped too tightly as pointed out already.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


    gary


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