Rusty Barrel Re-visited

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  • 02-16-2008, 02:25 PM
    joemags
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    Rusty Barrel Re-visited
    I got a chance to swing by and grab a few more frames of this and I like the results much better than the last time. What do you think?

    Thanks,
    Joe
  • 02-16-2008, 02:50 PM
    Frog
    Re: Rusty Barrel Re-visited
    Might just be my personal taste but I think it needs another element.
    Maybe a flower sticking out of one of the holes or something.
  • 02-16-2008, 02:58 PM
    joemags
    Re: Rusty Barrel Re-visited
    Of course it's your opinion, that's what this forum is all about and exactly what I'm looking for by posting here. For my taste a flower wouldn't do it but you have now given me some other ideas. Thanks Frog.

    Joe
  • 02-16-2008, 04:34 PM
    freedom1500
    Re: Rusty Barrel Re-visited
    Joe,
    100 percent improvement over the previous one. This is an abstract and (I think) should be treated as such. Personally, I don't need a reference point to see what it is. For me, it's enough that the colors are bright, there is a strong texture and an interesting composition. Your persistence and patience paid off.
    Congats.
    Robert
  • 02-16-2008, 10:43 PM
    GB1
    Re: Rusty Barrel Re-visited
    Nice work.

    I think it's better than the last one in many respects. The detail and the overall illumination is better, but I also think that it is too bright on the far right side, getting very close to being blown out actually (on my home monitor). I think it is also a bit better with some of the bottom cropped out, and then some of the right. I adjusted my browser size to visualize it and to me it gets to the pt faster.

    GB
  • 02-17-2008, 12:08 AM
    gahspidy
    Re: Rusty Barrel Re-visited
    Much improved from the previous version.It does appear as if you applied a little too much sharpening to this web version. It is a bit bright on the right side, but if you were to apply a mulitply layer at about 25% over this one you should get a nice result.
    Good work.
  • 02-17-2008, 08:02 PM
    joemags
    Re: Rusty Barrel Re-visited
    Thanks everyone. I appreciate all the feedback and comments.

    Joe