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Other than that, I think this could be an interesting shot. The sepia doesn't really do anything for me, I'd either go with a harsh black and white, or saturated color.
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I like the sepia color, but the movie title area seems sooooooo bright in comparison to the rest of the area.. too much contrast for me. I agree with adina that the tilt is bad... technical issues like this can strike a big blow sometimes... It could also be a bit sharper (it might be the scan though).
Finally, I think this entire subject, meaning from the outer sides of the doorframes all the ways up to the movie title area, needs more border area/white space (not exactly "white" here of course). I seems really cramped to me.