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    God is my co-pilot...

    Who knows... bored i guess.
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    Re: God is my co-pilot...

    First off, you're a little tilted here.

    Other than that, I think this could be an interesting shot. The sepia doesn't really do anything for me, I'd either go with a harsh black and white, or saturated color.

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    Re: God is my co-pilot...

    I like this and the sepia is fine, but the picture needs just one person in one of the entrances, preferably not posing for the camera.
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    Re: God is my co-pilot...

    In the “early years”, a georgia boy joins “the way to war”. A few years later, the “georgia boy returns”. He is mentally tired and physically exhausted. He tries to find a new meaning of life; He chooses to be”in the footsteps of Marco Polo”. He faces many difficulties in the journey. Whenever he is depressed, he always says, “God is my co-pilot”. The journey is finished with bitter-sweet experience. The boy eventually becomes an infamous “hero-author-hunter”. His name is pxxn.

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    Serious Mistake

    Serious mistake. The last 2 lines are "The boy eventually becomes a famous “hero-author-hunter”. His name is pxxn."
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    Re: God is my co-pilot...

    I like it. Has a nice feel of bygone times. Thanks to yo yo for the story line.
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    Re: God is my co-pilot...

    I like the sepia color, but the movie title area seems sooooooo bright in comparison to the rest of the area.. too much contrast for me. I agree with adina that the tilt is bad... technical issues like this can strike a big blow sometimes... It could also be a bit sharper (it might be the scan though).

    Finally, I think this entire subject, meaning from the outer sides of the doorframes all the ways up to the movie title area, needs more border area/white space (not exactly "white" here of course). I seems really cramped to me.

    Hope this helps -

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