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Thread: Noon Break

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    Noon Break

    Taken in El Porto de Santa Maria, Spain.

    All comments and critique appreciated.

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    Great Image...

    You sure are getting out and about latey.

    I like this image, it kind of reminds me of something from Henri Cartier-Bresson.

    I think you can crop the bottom off just a bit, so there is no street showing, it would make the image a little more impactful.

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    Re: Noon Break

    I like this as well for the lighting, the texture of the wall, and the subject sitting inside the opening just outside the dark of inside.I agree with Brian about cropping the street out. Something about the part of the sign on the left side I find distracting to the scene, and when I crop in from the left just to the doorway, I find the composition more comfortable, or pleasing to view. Good b&w contrast Nice Shot
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