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  • 10-24-2006, 04:54 AM
    yogestee
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    Studio shot of Renee..

    Canon350D/Tamron SP AF 28-75mm 2.8
    125th@f8.0
    200ISO

    Jurgen
    Australia
  • 10-24-2006, 07:56 AM
    Frog
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    Light, foucs, etc seem to be dead on but missing top of head and back of hair bother me.
    I think a slight pull back would work better.
  • 10-24-2006, 09:27 AM
    GB1
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    Jurgen - I agree that the composition is just a little too chopped. But not sure including everything's the answer either... Although it is sort of a neat retro shot, it's so 2-D, sort of bothers me a bit. Also, seems like the lighting is too strong.

    Since her hand and mouth area is the center of interest, what abou this crop?
  • 10-24-2006, 11:08 AM
    readingr
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    Jurgen,

    I love it. The texture of the skin, the hair and the black background fits this perfectly.

    GB - crop is too crowded for me

    Roger
  • 10-24-2006, 01:18 PM
    MB1
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    That crop is a little too tight for me but I do agree that it could use a crop. I like the look and texture of her hair and would keep some of that in.
  • 10-24-2006, 04:48 PM
    Ronnoco
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    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Frog
    Light, foucs, etc seem to be dead on but missing top of head and back of hair bother me.
    I think a slight pull back would work better.

    I strongly agree with Frog. You get some good shots and become too tight with the framing either in camera or cropping in post production.

    Ronnoco
  • 10-24-2006, 05:18 PM
    GB1
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    Call me weird, but I'm still seeing a strong crop here.

    How about some Andy Warhol-like repetition?
  • 10-24-2006, 05:53 PM
    MB1
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    Quote:

    Originally Posted by GB1
    Call me weird, but I'm still seeing a strong crop here.

    How about some Andy Warhol-like repetition?

    Now this I like. You took a pretty good image and really tightened it up. The repetition idea is pretty good too but your crop is what really works here.