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  1. 05-17-2008, 06:24 PM #1
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    Ericsson Memorial

    With my new Olympus 420.

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    Re: Ericsson Memorial

    I like everything except the right side being chopped.
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  3. 05-17-2008, 06:42 PM #3
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    Right side crop.

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    I like everything except the right side being chopped.
    I did it on purpose to get a striking portrait of a pretty dull memorial. I wasn't looking for the usual.
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    Re: Ericsson Memorial

    I like how you cropped the right side but think all of his collar should be in on the left. I like the blue tone to it. The lighting, shadows are perfect Nice work.
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    Re: Ericsson Memorial

    Maybe a little off the top? I like the way the eyes are shown. Great shot
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    A lil' wider view.

    I'm thinking it isn't quite as dramatic but here you are.
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    Re: Ericsson Memorial

    I like it where the entire head's in the frame. Not a bad shot of a subject that's normally hard to photograph. It works.

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